Thursday, January 26, 2012

Airsoft or Paintball

Authors note: I wrote this piece to improve my score for conclusion Also I like both of these subjects.

Have you ever had to make that choice between two things but you really like both? Airsoft and Paintball are probably two of those things. One way to decided between the two is price. Another way could be the usability, and how much you like it. One of the last things is what is more reliable. In all of these ways to decide I think that Airsoft is the best choice. This is mostly because of the prices, and a lot of people have them. That means you can have more people, and more people is more fun!


A couple of similarities between the two of them are both are mostly an outdoor activity, but they can both be used indoors. Another similarity is that they both are guns and run off the same way to play “if you’re hit you’re out”. One of the main similarities is that that they are both around the same price range for buying $60-$300 but bullets for Airsoft are about 10 dollars cheaper than paint balls and the Airsoft bullets have twice as much bb’s/ container. This is one of the main reasons why I prefer Airsoft over paint ball.


A few differences between the two are that paint ball uses compressed air unlike most electric Airsoft guns. So that is another advantage for Airsoft guns compared to paintball. A giant difference is that Airsoft guns also feel and look like real guns and can be confused. This however is one advantage for paintball. Finally and the biggest one for your choice is witch one you like more because the only reason you get something is because you like it. For me it is Airsoft for you it may be paintball I don’t know but whatever it is for you get it.


Once again it only matters what you like the most so if you ever have to make this choice or another like it just go with what you like best. Or if you like them the same compare versatility, price, and popularity. If you compare both of your subjects with all of these things, listed and explained above I am sure you will find that Airsoft is better than paintball overall. Because of the price and popularity of Airsoft it makes it an excellent expertise choice.

Wednesday, January 25, 2012

Sorry,

Authors note; the first 50 words in this short story are from the original story and i wrote this piece to improve in ideas.

The boy wanted to say something else other that "Thank you, ma’am" to Mrs. Luella Bates Washington Jones, but he couldn’t do so as he turned at the barren stoop and looked back at the large woman in the door. He barely managed to say "Thank you" before she shut the door. And he never saw her again. Until one day on December 1942 behind a nice church on the corner of Churchill road only a few blocks away from her old house. Witch for some reason was locked up nice and tight with a massive lock. As he strolled through the back lot looking for her because he had heard she was here, and he was here to tell her the good news that he was going off to World War 2 now that he was old enough. After a few hours of looking he found her toward the back of the lot next to bench as he drew closer he sat on the bench. And had conversation with her and told her how he was joining the war. When he left he checked out from the church and the priest asked him what his relationship with her was. Roger paused then thought about and said “She was my mother” The priest replied “sorry, but all good things must end”.

Monday, January 23, 2012

Creative!

Authors note: I wrote this piece to improve my score on word choice.
Dave stopped dead then analyzed his pockets. Where was the Test Sample? He briskly turned around and started to prance back to the mansion as he had only just skipped out of seconds ago. Last time the door was locked maybe the owner unlocked it for any other guests to the inquisitive party. As Dave turned the knob it started to turn he filled with joy maybe this was not going to be so hard. He pushed open the door took one step inside and plummeted to the floor in his own pool of blood.

Tyler Hull

Tuesday, January 17, 2012

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Thursday, January 12, 2012

Dead man's Head

"This is a ending to Dead Man's Path"


Later that day, the old priest came to visit Obi again for the second time. “I have heard that your school report is not faring as well” said the priest. “Do not play games with me old priest I know what is going on” Replied Obi. “Oh do you”, The priest said smartly. “Yes I do and I will give you three days to fix it all or you will be joining your ancestors”. “OK wise guy I will fix it”. Then within the next 3 days he made a alternating trail. Then there was nothing heard between the two for weeks but on the 1 month anniversary of the school Obi's head was found at the entrances gate!