In the fall of 1985 there was a young chiild who always wanted to make a house out of candy. Everybody said it will never happen get a new dream but he was determined. After 5 years of collecting money and planing he found this candy called cho yon it was made of a substance that is natural and only is found in rain forest. It was called yon this product would not melt or freeze. So the child now 13 started designing it but he was shy and did not want to hire anybody because he thought his idea was nerdy and stupid. He tried doing it him self but gave up.
After that the child grew up to be a very smart kid going to be a docter and be rich but he still was not happy. so he got married and had a kid this child wanted to make a car that was made out of legos and all the kids at school made fun of him. Meanwhile his dad new that he wanted to do this but decided not to interfere. 3 days later his son at 12 committed suicide. The dad knew why and morned for days. 1 year later at 33 he had another kid with the same dream as the one before because of all they pictures they had kept of there other son. The dad no sighns of the sarrow gone help his child with every thing possible to make his dream come true.
Tuesday, February 22, 2011
Friday, February 18, 2011
Winter War
Have you ever imagined a book with everything a book needs that you can’t set it down? Winter war by “William Durbin” is that book. It has ever thing to make it a once in a life time book. This book is based on a true story about the desperate need for a country to prove itself to the world through the eyes of one child, Marko.
The only thing that the author could have done better was make the story a little longer it was a little short for a war with a country in dire need. A few more things he could have done are, use more vocabulary and shorter sentences. The reason for the sentences was because he had way to many run on that never ended. Like this one Chapter 11 first sentence. “Marko lay in the dark tent, half awake, thinking back on a hot June day when he and Johan had gone bog walking through a swamp north of his grandma’s farm, he wished that he could do that again, but never will he”. The vocabulary is on there because during this sentence he says 2 descriptive words and both were simplest vocabulary when he could have used better words.
Although there were these negative choices in his vocabulary that Durbin could have fixed there were a million more good choices that took this book to the top even though this book was based of a true story Durbin made it worth reading. Usually I hate reading history. My favorite part of the story was when the snipers came back naked on skies in the winter because they were taking a sauna on break and the enemy found them and chased them back. That surprised me completely I did not with the slights thought that that would happen.
This is mostly because of the surprises that they throw at you witch make it unpredictable, and when your story is unpredictable why not turn the page. This book, reminds me of my favorite series” Alex rider”. The main reason that this book reminds me of the Alex rider series is how the story ended. They did not just drop it off a cliff and say the end, the authors made a puzzle and one thing missing and then you understand it all and put the last piece in, but all of a sudden you’re missing another piece and they let you create the end. This book, Winter War by “William Durbin” Is a once in a lifetime book and has everything it needs to make it a great.
The only thing that the author could have done better was make the story a little longer it was a little short for a war with a country in dire need. A few more things he could have done are, use more vocabulary and shorter sentences. The reason for the sentences was because he had way to many run on that never ended. Like this one Chapter 11 first sentence. “Marko lay in the dark tent, half awake, thinking back on a hot June day when he and Johan had gone bog walking through a swamp north of his grandma’s farm, he wished that he could do that again, but never will he”. The vocabulary is on there because during this sentence he says 2 descriptive words and both were simplest vocabulary when he could have used better words.
Although there were these negative choices in his vocabulary that Durbin could have fixed there were a million more good choices that took this book to the top even though this book was based of a true story Durbin made it worth reading. Usually I hate reading history. My favorite part of the story was when the snipers came back naked on skies in the winter because they were taking a sauna on break and the enemy found them and chased them back. That surprised me completely I did not with the slights thought that that would happen.
This is mostly because of the surprises that they throw at you witch make it unpredictable, and when your story is unpredictable why not turn the page. This book, reminds me of my favorite series” Alex rider”. The main reason that this book reminds me of the Alex rider series is how the story ended. They did not just drop it off a cliff and say the end, the authors made a puzzle and one thing missing and then you understand it all and put the last piece in, but all of a sudden you’re missing another piece and they let you create the end. This book, Winter War by “William Durbin” Is a once in a lifetime book and has everything it needs to make it a great.
Friday, February 4, 2011
Sports
I love sports it is a good way to get outside. If there were no sports in the world every person would be fat and the world and nothing would ever get done. My favorite sport is go kart-ing this is my favorite because it is very fast. My second favorite sport is football because it is vary intense.
Candy
Candy is a child's dream it is so Delicious. MANY People say it rots your teeth, and don't give their children candy. This is true but why brush their teeth then. and you will say because your supposed to and all the kids say but mom and then you say go home. It is horrible so to stop this i am going to build a candy land for free it will be awesome.
Thursday, February 3, 2011
snow day
The best snow day would be when we got trapped in school and we could not get out. Then we could play football and basketball all day long in the gym. Also it could be the worst because the teachers could make us do work all day long it would stink. i hope one day that that would happen so that i could pull of a all night with me buds.
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